Here is a little thing I was just playing around with the other night. It is very simple and very straight. As always, click on the image for a larger view. Constructive criticism is always open.
I'd suggest not having the bar across his nose-- frame the face, keeps away any subliminal suggestion of bars/prison, plus you can make the word-bars into interlocking crosses.
As my picture suggests, I was made in the womb. After residing approximately 9 months there, I noticed that my domicile was shrinking, and if I didn't act quick I was going to be without room. So out I went, and for 31 years I resided in South Louisiana with shorts stays in North Carolina, West Virginia, and one extended stay in Delaware.
I did my Undergrad at Louisiana State University in General Studies, which means I can speak about most things generally or about general things in an knowledgeable manner. I am also a founding Memeber of the LSU-Parousians. I completed my MA in theology from the University of Notre Dame by means of the ECHO program.
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5 comments:
Nice. I'd change the yellow bars color or the font color to make it more readable.
True.
I'd suggest not having the bar across his nose-- frame the face, keeps away any subliminal suggestion of bars/prison, plus you can make the word-bars into interlocking crosses.
Love the guy in the lower left, though.
Ohhh thanks for point that out. I never thought about the bars and prison thing.
Who-hoo, my film class came in useful! ;^p Had us watch "Cool Hand Luke" fifteen times, even the bars on a *fan* can trigger the "prison" thought.
I think it looks good, honestly, but I'm a sympathetic audience; if someone is pulling a Jonah....
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