Nice. I'd change the yellow bars color or the font color to make it more readable.
I'd suggest not having the bar across his nose-- frame the face, keeps away any subliminal suggestion of bars/prison, plus you can make the word-bars into interlocking crosses.Love the guy in the lower left, though.
Ohhh thanks for point that out. I never thought about the bars and prison thing.
Who-hoo, my film class came in useful! ;^p Had us watch "Cool Hand Luke" fifteen times, even the bars on a *fan* can trigger the "prison" thought.I think it looks good, honestly, but I'm a sympathetic audience; if someone is pulling a Jonah....
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